tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post4875952489838895502..comments2024-03-26T18:16:02.263-06:00Comments on The Animal Jam Whip: Story Contest: Where is Mira? (CLOSED)gingy gingyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16789134313623744296noreply@blogger.comBlogger45125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post-76228391947144528952016-04-30T08:35:23.365-06:002016-04-30T08:35:23.365-06:00Most likely! :)Most likely! :)gingy gingyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16789134313623744296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post-56484564604194000392016-04-28T13:54:21.747-06:002016-04-28T13:54:21.747-06:00I was thinking that too! Maybe for the next contes...I was thinking that too! Maybe for the next contest, instead of rare item Mondays there could be a small den beta or clothing beta for 2nd place. Also, are you planning on doing a spring fashion show (its nearly summer, but there's still may!) ~Mff37Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post-37699973995965841382016-04-28T13:51:27.822-06:002016-04-28T13:51:27.822-06:00Your story is fabulous! It deserves to win, if not...Your story is fabulous! It deserves to win, if not at least get some placement because that was AMAZING ♡~~Mff37Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post-73403910047352697572016-04-27T16:44:18.054-06:002016-04-27T16:44:18.054-06:00Ok! I sent you my story via email!-cheerOk! I sent you my story via email!-cheerAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post-41651205866339875792016-04-27T15:14:02.322-06:002016-04-27T15:14:02.322-06:00Beautiful story! I loved the part where Mira made ...Beautiful story! I loved the part where Mira made the decision to leave... it touched my heart. <3gingy gingyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16789134313623744296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post-85174000855423207362016-04-27T15:12:59.415-06:002016-04-27T15:12:59.415-06:00Thanks for your advice! I will take that into cons...Thanks for your advice! I will take that into consideration for future contests. :)gingy gingyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16789134313623744296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post-62835032308415361332016-04-27T14:24:05.553-06:002016-04-27T14:24:05.553-06:00@Naffy
By the way, I feel like the 3rd place prize...@Naffy<br />By the way, I feel like the 3rd place prize is more appealing than the 2nd place prize right now (Generally, people like worns better than assorted small rares, I think). <br /><br />Just throwing that out there for your consideration ^-^Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05972468947616524923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post-88568511890274763352016-04-27T06:56:23.995-06:002016-04-27T06:56:23.995-06:00Part 2 of my Story
The remaining animals rushed ov...Part 2 of my Story<br />The remaining animals rushed over to see her. "Mira your back" Greely, a blue wolf yipped. "We were worried" Sir gilbert, a tiger, added. Liza, a panda, nodded "We were worried something had happened to you" she said. Cosmo,a brown koala, nodded in agreement. She sighed "Don't worry about me, focus on the war. We must find someway to drive these awful phantoms away from Jamaa." she said. They nodded, "Yes Mira" they said. She frowned glancing around, a battle with the phantoms was a suicide mission. The phantoms outnumbered them and the animals were weak already. However, what other choice did they have? It was fight or die, there was no other way unless... She paused glancing at her friends an idea forming in her head. What if she granted these four faithful animals power? It could work... "Greely, Sir Gilbert, Cosmo, Liza... you must listen to me. I have a plan to drive away these phantoms once and for all but it's dangerous. I will give you four powers which will allow you to drive these phantoms away and protect your fellow animals. Then Jamaa will be safe again" she said. They looked stunned. "Us?" Cosmo asked "You choose us out of all animals?" She nodded "Yes Cosmo i choose you four. You are the animals i trust the most, i know you will return Jamaa to what it was before the war!" she said. "I accept your offer Mira. I will fight to the end" Greely said. "I will also fight! These phantoms will wish they never were born after i'm through with them" Sir Gilbert said. Liza nodded "You can count me in!" she said. "If.. if you really want me to i will fight" Cosmo said, his voice nervous. She smiled, and they began to glow. She filled them with power, giving them some of her own abilities. The glow faded and they were ready to face the phantoms. "You are no longer ordinary animals. From now on you are the Alphas, the protectors of Jamaa!" she shouted.They dipped their head to her then began moving toward Jamaa Township to face the phantoms. After hours of fighting they returned, victorious. "What now?" Cosmo asked Mira "Should we start replanting the plants and get rid of this pollution?" Mira sighed "Cosmo, Sir Gilbert, Liza and Greely. It is time you make these decisions for yourself. I can't help you anymore, you must help yourselfs. You are the Alphas, i am just an old weak bird. I am leaving Jamaa, i can not stay here any longer. You are the protectors of jamaa now" she spoke sadly but firmly. "Mira you can't! Mira you must stay! Don't leave us! Mira! MIRA!" the animals cried out. She ignored them and flew into the sky. She dove down into the flames of the fire and vanished into thin air. After that the only animals who ever saw or spoke to her were the new alphas she had chosen. However, her spirit can still be seen in the fire where the animals saw her go. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10034895239086175675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post-86367505104188680102016-04-27T06:55:23.912-06:002016-04-27T06:55:23.912-06:00My story was too long so i'm dividing it into ...My story was too long so i'm dividing it into separate posts I'm Jammer3l0fj and nonmember btw.<br />Mira circled over Jamaa. The once lovely city was ruined. The phantoms had struck with no warning and had captured the city of Jamaa. All they left was destruction and pollution. The rivers and seas flowed with pollution, the plants had all withered and died, and many animals were sick and dying. Animals were captured, never to be seen again and entire species were being driven out. All of this was her fault. She had created these phantoms! Life had been perfect, life had been so sweet. Zios and her had created Jamaa, a happy and safe place for animals of all kinds. However, life soon took a dark turn. Zios began pulling away he no longer spent as much time with her, he was always busy. Soon she found out why. He had fallen in love with a swan who lived in jamaa. She felt so betrayed, so angry! Her jealousy, her bitterness, her anger came together and created the first Phantoms. She had called them her children, and cared and protected them. She thought they were good that they were a blessing. She never guessed how wrong she was. When Zios discovered them he tried to destroy them, he knew they had the power to destroy jamaa. However, more and more phantoms began appearing, and he sacrificed himself to destroy them. Her anger had turned to grief when she realized what had happened. Her creations were evil, they had killed her husband. New phantoms were born from her tears and the darkness of jamaa. No one had known they were there till it was too late. Now Jamaa was falling apart around her. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10034895239086175675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post-78558837601543637672016-04-25T15:08:34.610-06:002016-04-25T15:08:34.610-06:00You can do whatever you want, as long as it follow...You can do whatever you want, as long as it follows the rules and the plot is somewhere along the lines of Mira's disappearance. ^.^gingy gingyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16789134313623744296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post-64718758438956361762016-04-25T14:14:42.519-06:002016-04-25T14:14:42.519-06:00My story idea doesn't include Mira actually ru...My story idea doesn't include Mira actually running off. Is that okay, or do I have to change it to fit the prompt?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05972468947616524923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post-52670817121257084182016-04-25T11:38:45.410-06:002016-04-25T11:38:45.410-06:00It's ok, I reread it and it made sense. Blame ...It's ok, I reread it and it made sense. Blame me for skim reading XD<br />I got confused due to the fact it seemed Mira ditched jamaa and is now happy in paradise lol<br /><br />~mffAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post-4250922641067556762016-04-25T03:27:51.005-06:002016-04-25T03:27:51.005-06:00After Zios' fall, Mira flew to a far away cave...After Zios' fall, Mira flew to a far away cave in the mountains where no animal could find her. She cried and never stopped for anything, even for food and drink. Without realising it, her tears, made with fear and sadness, fell from her beak and onto the ground. Phantoms began to rise from these tears and they quietly left the cave, destroying all nature in their path. <br /><br />Finally after 3 years mourning for Zios, she emerged from the cave. In horror, she stared at the world around her. Every where she looked, trees were torn down, rivers were polluted, phantoms roamed around scaring all creatures, great and small. Suddenly a phantom spotted her and began to advance at her. Seeing an ancient temple, she quickly dive inside and block the entrance with a stone. Lighting a torch, she sees all the animals in Jamaa, huddling all together in the dark. As if the light-bulb in her head flicked on, she realised what she had done. She knew what she had to do, it was her duty.<br /><br />Calling the alphas together, they defeated the phantoms. But the work was not done yet. Trees were needed to be planted, rivers were needed to be cleaned up, and there were still more phantoms to capture. Mira then instructed the Alphas to gather all animals together and clean up the mess the phantoms had made.<br /><br />Soon, Jamaa was beautiful again, and at peace. When Mira saw that everything was right again, she bid everyone farewell and flew back to her sky palace. But before she did, she went to the cave she mourned in and sealed it up with ice, carving a seal at the entrance. This is now the mysterious cave that had always been sealed up in Mt Shiver. Mira was never seen again, but if you dance around the camp fire in Sarepia Forest, you might see Mira's spirit floating around, happy to see peace in Jamaa.<br /><br />The End<br /><br />Username: sugarcat2 <br />Status: Non Member Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post-51991549268182179452016-04-24T23:34:23.565-06:002016-04-24T23:34:23.565-06:00This is BRILLIANT~mff37This is BRILLIANT~mff37Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post-50664083073525832662016-04-24T22:31:25.540-06:002016-04-24T22:31:25.540-06:00@mff37
What is confusing about it? I can explain i...@mff37<br />What is confusing about it? I can explain it if you want!Swirlshinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17530826415352215780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post-65254653675326917762016-04-24T22:30:49.189-06:002016-04-24T22:30:49.189-06:00Thank you!Thank you!Swirlshinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17530826415352215780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post-14751772432006162232016-04-24T16:09:39.281-06:002016-04-24T16:09:39.281-06:00~ANIMAL JAM IGN: lily4279
Ok after Mira had run of...~ANIMAL JAM IGN: lily4279<br />Ok after Mira had run off, she decided that she would never come back to Jamma or any place where she had once been. Therefore, she had turned evil. After losing her bestie, she created a temple and and ruled over animal slaves. The harsh treatment she had given her slaves caused millions of deaths. A wizard created her a potion of ever-lasting life because that was her husband. Ever since she left Jamma, people have worshipped her. Nobody really knows she is evil. Lol. I know its weird but dont judge me.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post-91354778148849413712016-04-24T14:30:17.337-06:002016-04-24T14:30:17.337-06:00http://fishyandcosmickitty.blogspot.com/2016/04/fo...http://fishyandcosmickitty.blogspot.com/2016/04/for-nafaria9s-story-contest.html#more is the link to my story! My username is Cheetah87516 and I'm a member.Cosmicnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post-63913614885751891872016-04-24T14:05:26.859-06:002016-04-24T14:05:26.859-06:00(Written in Mira's Perspective) (Not copying a...(Written in Mira's Perspective) (Not copying anyone's ideas) (Sorry if I got off track with this. I just love to write so much, it just flows and I type it. I'm Ducktapeis and I will be a Member soon. Thank you so much if you choose me to be a winner. Thank you if you have read my story. Hope you like it!) <br /><br /> Zios cam crashing to the ground. His surface, no longer pretty. His surface crumbly and dirty, gouged into the grassy surface near the Lost Temple. I started to cry. Praying to the heavens up above, I wished that this was all a dream. I woke up surrounded by purple sludge inside a cave. I found an opening of the cave. I looked out, seeing Jamma. Not colorful. All purple. I could see purple objects moving. I started to fly out of the cave, but turned back. I was too scared to face the Purples. The next day, I woke up to Valentina (Eagle Alpha) speaking. I looked around, searching for the Alpha. I looked down and remembered a special necklace placed around my neck by Valentina. I touched the necklace. "Mira, you are needed. We have yet to find what these creatures are. Remember. You are the most powerful animal in Jamaa." the necklace sang out. Just then, I knew my service was needed. Badly. I flew to Jamaa flying through purple rain. I stopped to rest in Jamaa Township to let my wings rest. Purples spread around me, circling me like a shark. I feared for my life. I shook off all the rain off my wings and spread them apart. I started to move my wings, until I saw the biggest Purple of all. "I am the Phantom King! Stop attacking at once!" he boomed shaking the ground. I froze. The Purples are called Phantoms..... The other Alphas has been studying the Phantoms for days trying to figure out their names. I spread my wings to take flight, but I was stopped forever. The Phantom King had cast a spell on me. Struggling with all my might, I couldn't move. All the phantoms left out of sight. Still there today, hoping a Jammer will save me. Some day, I will come and save Zios and all the Phantoms will be gone forever. Until now, goodbye. Keep me company at Jamaa Township. Ducktapeis Coolnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post-40871877206930651832016-04-24T10:48:31.872-06:002016-04-24T10:48:31.872-06:00I love this one! x3I love this one! x3Maddiebook3noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post-44586233865643036102016-04-24T06:17:07.267-06:002016-04-24T06:17:07.267-06:00The typing messed up in my story , it was about ho...The typing messed up in my story , it was about how Mira was watching Jamaa, returned to her Crystal Palace , created staffs with stones, and decided to talk to Liza. I am not done and I could not put my user so this story will be 2 part - RMCkkd92 lol I just now figured out how to fix messed up typing. Btw RMCkkd92 is my user and thanks for making this story. I was giving up on AJ and I think I may quit soon but, this has put my quitting off. �� That awkward smile is so me, lolAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post-15189324862631342992016-04-24T06:08:20.451-06:002016-04-24T06:08:20.451-06:00Mira's beak trembled as she watched all of Jam...Mira's beak trembled as she watched all of Jamaa. Destruction and disastrous rained through. She was MIRA, the PROTECTOR yet, now she was the destroyer. Mira knew not of how she had did this, she only knew the Phantoms were the effect of her grief. Her wings started flapping, all the way back to the Crystal Palace. <br /> <br /> She stared at the great crystal immbended into the wall. Filled with power, it protected the castle, where she left many mystical stones. They had a power lumming by them. She grabed her collection of fairly mysterious stones and started binding them to staffs. Soon, she had many all piled up. Now, it was time to call Liza.<br /><br /> Mira never really new why she had taken a liking to the young Panda. Maybe it was seeing sweet Liza alone as a child, or maybe it was just her excitement towards helping animals that had made Mira want her as a apprentice. Either way, Mira was happy to have her. For the first time in weeks, Mira felt joy. But, that joy was squashed. Mira knew this was not a time for joy. <br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post-68442273108510913582016-04-23T23:38:45.459-06:002016-04-23T23:38:45.459-06:00Darn I just realised I wrote "yo return with&...Darn I just realised I wrote "yo return with" instead of to return with DX Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post-86267221120890125212016-04-23T23:24:59.255-06:002016-04-23T23:24:59.255-06:00A little confusing, but I love the idea and you ha...A little confusing, but I love the idea and you have a great choice of words! Wish you luck ♡ ~~mff37Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8668909749046861161.post-91458144943655258222016-04-23T23:22:57.732-06:002016-04-23T23:22:57.732-06:00I love how it ties in with modern Jamaasian cultur...I love how it ties in with modern Jamaasian cultures! I feel you might win something ~mff37Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com